Editing Service (up to 10,000 words)
Need some advice on developing your horror short story ideas? Does your story keep getting rejected and you don't know why?
I will read your story and write a detailed 450 word (or more) critique. I will concentrate specifically on:
- Point of view consistency
- Plot and setting effectiveness
- Use of backstory and/or flashbacks
- Dialogue and character authenticity
- dialogue tags, passive voice, and comma splices
Once you have sent payment, email the entire story to darkpenpress (at) gmail (dot) com with the subject line Short Story Critique. Please attach the story in a word doc or rich text file. Response time is around 7 days. If you have any questions, feel free to email me directly or through the CONTACT portion of this website.
Dark Peninsula Press is 100% funded out of pocket. All money generated from this service will be used to fund future publication for Dark Peninsula Press.